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Trying something new: Seed Words #1 07/18/2011
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July Reverb11: What new thing will you try this month?

There's an old exercise that English teachers often use with young writers where students rip out words from magazines and paste them together to create found poetry. I've been thinking about this idea - the process of ripping out words and planting them to form new thoughts, new stories - and I've found myself doing a bit of the same, spotting words I like at the mall, at the grocery store, wherever, and then typing them into my phone to "save" them for later.  They are usually words I would never normally use in my writing: lease, avid, even Jesus. I've been saving them and then planting them into my writing, like seeds in a garden. 

I've also had a few former students recently ask me for writing exercises. I love that their time with me in an actual classroom setting wasn't enough, that they're hungry for more. And I want to give them ideas, possibilities, and encouragement, but it takes a lot of effort to email each student with new prompts.  This got me thinking.

I loved the Reverb10 challenge. I work well with assignments, and apparently, so do other people. So I'm going to try something new. I'll post various prompts - challenges, if you want to think about them that way - to encourage you to write.  With each prompt, I will post photographs of different words I've collected around town - I'm calling them Seed Words - to get you writing. 

Here's how it'll work:

1. I'll post the prompt.  It will include 5-10 Seed Words.

2. You write, incorporating each of the Seed Words into your writing.  
It can be poetry, fiction, flash fiction, nonfiction a blog post, anything. 
It could even be one pretty little sentence.  

It should attempt to include each of the Seed Words in some context that doesn't necessarily relate to the chosen theme. 

3. You can post your response, if you'd like.  How?  
Post it on your blog and then include a link to your page in the comments section below the prompt.  I want to read it! 
Or you can post it as a comment on my page.  You can also tweet a link to your response with the hashtag #seedwords.

That's it, I think!  Just a way to get you writing.  A way to get me writing.  A way to get to know you through your writing.  

I'm going to post the prompt and then wait a week before I post my own response, to give you time to let the words simmer in your own brain before you read mine. 
Shall we begin?  

SEED WORDS #1

Source: Walking in suburban Los Angeles. Thinking about the idea of a seed word, I found myself looking to the ground, fascinated by how we've replaced actually seeds with little bits of language.  Perhaps next week, I'll look up.
 
And one last one, for bonus points - a trilingual selection of Seed Words! 
Picture
Here they are, your Seed Words:

water, limit, valve, electric, iron, orbit, telemetry, signal, drains AND look

Okay friends: start planting those seeds!  


Click here for Seed Words #2: At the playground. 

 


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Gaby?!
07/21/2011 01:52

My eyelids are heavy. That tell tale sign of sleep on it’s way. I wish it were that easy, to turn it all off. Drift away. Forget everything that troubles me.

I want it to be that easy. To leave the traffic of my mind. Leave to a far off land in the planes of my mind. Float away, my body in orbit. Float away, my mind pacified. Float away in healing waters. Electric currents to envelop my form.

No, not how it goes. I float, float away. I have no control. I’ve gone too far, too far from shore. I can’t go back. I’ve gone too far.

No longer floating, now I’m drowning. You can’t see me now. Look at me. Посмотрите на меня. Titta på mig. Olhe para mim. You can’t help me now. I’m sinking. Nothing to hold on to, no one to pull me out. Weight heavy on my shoulders, too heavy to bear. I’ve reached my limit. Close my eyes and scream. No sound. No breath. All my life drained from my body. Where is your telemeter now to receive my SOS.

My eyes wide open. Sound flows from my mouth, enters my ears. I’m awake. Sweat plasters hair to my face. I’m awake. Lungs struggle to breathe, like a broken valve in my iron lung. I’m awake.

So why do I feel so dead?

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Kathy
07/21/2011 17:31

Gaby,
I love that you're my first participant! Amazing! I'm so proud of you for writing so beautifully and for sharing it with the world! Yay!

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Holly Roberts link
07/22/2011 07:28

Hi there! I saw your seed words challenge on She Writes and decided to give it a try. It caused me to come up with a post that I wouldn't have written otherwise. "Iron" got me thinking about a cast iron skillet, and it kept going from there.

Here is the resulting blog post:
http://honkusgrogana.blogspot.com/2011/07/fried-jalapeno-peppers-yes.html

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Kathy
07/22/2011 12:38

"About as pleasant as an electric eel in your mouth" - I LOVE IT! And I love that you included them in a recipe. Fantastic. Thank you so much for participating! I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing!

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Em link
08/02/2011 14:35

http://booglarise.blogspot.com/2011/08/use-these-words-in-piece-of-writing.html

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Kathy
08/03/2011 09:56

Hi Emma,
I couldn't figure out how to comment on your page. I love this. Each word a different line of thought; each word contains a story, a history, humor, compelling new vocabulary (poo pumper driver!!) I love the few sentences on the iron especially. Thank you so much for writing and for sharing your lovely words.

P.S. I had to google Telemetry, and I'm still not sure I understand it...

Kathy

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Katie link
08/10/2011 10:35

Hooray for seed words! I just finished my first one. It really does work!

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Bina link
08/28/2011 07:05

Broken water valve drains depleted souls.
So the headline read.
What happened?
Did the electric look
axe
into our intertwined iron of agonizing injuries
surgically slicing through the telemetry of our guilty wounded hopes
orchestratating this signal of ferocious fear

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Kathy
08/30/2011 06:32

Bina,
I'm loving your rants. Thank you for taking part and sharing your writing!
Kathy

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